FPV 338 (Fusil de Precision a Verrou )

This could be good... if you didn't use a solid black for the grip and other parts. If anything just use a dark (not too dark) of a grey. It seems you know how to outline things so that's good on you. But using black for the parts color is pretty bad seeing how it removes all detailing of the piece. To me, the grip looks flat, but I know the actual grip has curves in it. I'm not saying don't use dark colors, I'm recommending not using black for the main part it's self. For outlining it's good (seeing that's what everyone else thinks.) But other than that, this rifle looks pretty good. I would vent the hand guard a little bit but that's just me.